ENGLISH COMP 1
This is your final draft of the rough draft you turned in week 6. Please review the notes I sent back and make the appropriate changes.
Pick a recent change that has taken place in the world and write a 7 page essay to show its causes and/or effects to help you and your readers understand that change better.
Writing Requirements
- 7 pages
- 5 references, including a reference for the counter-argument.
- Title page
- Reference page
NOTES: You have a very good rough draft here. My notes are mainly a few grammatical things. However, there are a few places where you could beef up your points with some statistics. For example, what percentage of revenue can a company save by implementing telework practices? Please see my notes in the body of your paper. The errors are underlined in blue.